Hi guys!
I have fully completed part 3 and now u can see it to!
I hope u like it (especially the drawing) and tell me anything that I have done wrong ( if you want) !
Here it is....................
Remember stay safe, stay kind and have a nice day!
BYE
Hi Charlotte
ReplyDeleteI really like your volcano sketch ,the detail in the ash cloud is great! I see in your profile you like drawing, keep up the great home learning!
Kia ora!
DeleteThank you for the kind comment :)
Do you like drawing?
Bye have a nice day!
Hi Charlotte, you are using some amazing descriptive vocabulary...lava crawled over the rocky edge...the moonlit sky was filled with shocking lightning!!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your slides.
Hello,
DeleteThank you for the nice comment!
I am pleased you liked my slide.
If you were doing this what would you change in the sentence challenge?
Bye have a nice day!
Kia ora Charlotte. You have used some great adjectives and verbs. These help readers to create an image in their minds. I really like the words 'crawled, scurrying, moonlit sky'. I wonder if you could describe what the people are doing, instead of telling me?
ReplyDeleteHola!
DeleteThank you for the caring comment!
I will fix up my writing and will keep it in mind.
Bye have a nice day!
Charlotte
Hello Charlotte!
ReplyDeleteThis is Mikayla from Rm7!!!
I really like your blog post about Volcanoes I think everyone is doing because your class is my class is everyone is!!! I live really closed to a Volcano but it is not active anymore so I will not blow up. Do you like volcanoes???
P.S I like your drawing!!! Blog you later!!!
🐯⚽Mikayla⚽🐯